Monday, 10 December 2012


Screenplay of PROMISE ME
By Elliot Mckenize and Ken L Matonga


A LARGE WALL COVERED IN PICTURES, thousands of explicity, DEMONIC SNAP, various WOMEN being tourtured. SUNLIGHT floods in from an UNSEEN WINDOW, illuminating the pictures. A TALL SILLOUTE the SUCKS IN the light, the figure of GRIM (mid 30s) drowing out the brightness.

QUICK CUT of a dirty, BLOODY ARM improssoned in shackles, trembleing. Cut to BIRDS EYE VIEW from the ceiling showing the floor, ROOTING FOOD on the floor, garbage, brocken glass, and years of decay. PANARAMIC-LOW ANGLE SHOT beggining at the right hand of GRIM, emhassiing the dirt and blood in his nail and then swiftly encircling him in a jerky upwards motion from the hand to the back of his head. POINT OF VIEW SHOT cleaning SINISTER looking KNIFES of white table.

SWIFT CUT to a DIRECT LOW ANGLE SHOT of GRIMS dirty reaching for a PRISTINE KNIFE. He cleans it with a WHITE CLOTH. Booming DIEGETIC SOUND of GRIM humming "Momma's Gonna Buy You" nursery ryhme as he SLOWLY walk over to whimpering girl. He laughs manicly and JERKY HIGH ANGLE POV shot shows GRIM looking down on the girl as we quickly FADE TO BLACK. The only thing to be heard is the a few seconds of silence while we SUPER IMPOSE TITLES then, the shocking diegetic sound of GIRLS TERRIFIC SCREAM burst out and then, it is horrifly cut of by a METALIC SLASHING sound which is GRIM'S KNIFE

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